In today's workplace, a growing number of employers are beginning to evaluate employee value based on "immediate availability"—such as being constantly online and responding quickly—rather than long-term contributions. Meanwhile, some employees advocate for measuring performance primarily through work outcomes and creativity. The conflict between these two evaluation systems is becoming increasingly pronounced. Which standard do you believe is more aligned with the future trends of work? Please articulate your position, and support it with reasons and concrete examples.
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准
任务回应(Task Response):是否完整回应题目要求,观点是否清晰,论证是否充分
连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion):段落组织是否合理,逻辑是否清晰,连接词是否恰当
词汇资源(Lexical Resource):词汇是否丰富、准确,搭配是否地道
语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):句式是否多样,语法是否正确